The next day, Charles Yin called Max Mo: "You really are calm about your sister's situation."
Max Mo gave a light laugh. "A clown like that isn't worth worrying about."
Charles Yin smiled. "True enough. I heard Grand Duke Kubo has been pretty popular lately, and owns quite a few businesses."
Max Mo, who was signing some documents, suddenly paused, put down his pen, and finally asked, "What are you trying to say?"
"The eldest Miss of the Mo Family can't be bullied like that," Charles Yin said with a meaningful smile. "I'm sure you wouldn't just stand by and watch your sister get pushed around. So, want to team up with me?"
"Team up?" A glimmer of amusement flashed in Max Mo's pale blue eyes. "Are your hands itching again? What, have you set your sights on Grand Duke Kubo?"
Charles Yin laughed heartily and admitted directly, "If the two of us join forces, we could swallow up all his businesses in a month. Want to play?"
Max Mo said helplessly, "President Yin, you really haven't lost your edge! So, what's your plan?"
"I'll be heading over there in a few days, officially to scout for investments. But really..." Charles Yin's voice carried a hint of dominance. "I'm interested in that market. If we're going to do it, let's go for a monopoly. As long as we take down Grand Duke Kubo, we can monopolize the whole market there. As for the connections behind the scenes, don't worry—I've already taken care of everything."
Max Mo said, "You've already made all the preparations, so what else can I say? Well, thanks in advance for standing up for my sister, President Yin! For this partnership, you get sixty percent, I get forty."
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Smooth, idiomatic, and vivid. Dialogue feels natural and maintains Mo Zixin's authoritative but encouraging tone.
Dialogue is informal and emotionally resonant. Yu Jie's uncertainty is clear and relatable.
Maintains informal, supportive tone. Glossary consistency for 'Xixi' and Mo Zixin. Vivid and natural.
Excellent use of glossary terms ('Charles Yin'). Yu Jie's emotional intensity and excitement come through clearly. The business context is well preserved.
Vivid and idiomatic. Mo Zixin's warmth and leadership are well-expressed.
Imagery is vivid and idiomatic, fitting the emotional tone. Yu Jie's determination and optimism are clear.
Emotionally resonant, informal style. Yu Jie's inner resolve is well captured.
Glossary consistency for 'Charles Yin'. Dialogue is natural and maintains the fast-paced style.
Glossary check for 'Duke Kubo'. Jing Rong's emotional frustration and suspicion are vivid and idiomatic.
Glossary consistency for 'David Zhou'. Charles Yin's playful tone and informal style are well maintained.